|Reviews for The Affairs of the Supernatural|
| Hypergoddes chapter 7 . 11/25
Dun dun dunn! Lol it's really good so far! Dante is an adorable baby. And poor Arlene XDD! Can't wait for more!
| Broken Poetry chapter 2 . 4/22
lol, well they certainly have their own personalities. You've got zero worries on characterization my dear, got it down pat. I'm definitely curious to see where to take this one.
(Also, I know that you chose the name Arlene a while ago, but did you know that's also the name of this years first hurricane? Coincidence? Or foreshadowing? lol)
Your writing steams along at just the right pace, as always. The only thing I would recommend is going back and looking at your first chapter again, your exposition repeats itself a couple of times. Other than that you've got me hooked and I look forward to finding out what happens next. :)
| jeremy1555 chapter 1 . 4/21
She better wake up and start making those tacos!