|Reviews for Three paths|
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
This is really good. I loved reading it and looking for the deeper meaning. Some of the words could be used differently - for example, in the first sentence, "your dead phone lying in your soaked-through, clingy pants pocket". But regardless, the emotions and feelings of the story really show through your descriptions. I think your picture is really cool :) Minty.
| PeachesForMe chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
This is a really great piece. I understood about halfway through that the three paths are past, present, and future. The moral message of this is comforting and the piece is really well-written. There is only one error I noticed- "nit knacks" should be "knick-knacks".
This is amazing. Keep writing :)