Reviews for The Girl and Her Heart
amabeck25 chapter 1 . 1/21
I read your story and I really liked it. I truly appreciate both the story and your talent. I want to work on it and put in the effort as a comic commission artist. I would like to convert it into a comic, and I have some ideas that I would like to share with you. I am Dam sure you will love it!
Best regard,
amabeck25
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WJosephusW chapter 1 . 8/15/2022
Poetically angst-y and beautifully-written, the piece captures and conveys hurt and fragility with brutal effectiveness. 10/10.
D. M. Robb chapter 1 . 5/6/2017
This was so beautiful and heartbreaking, a perfect metaphor for what can happen when we hide our true selves. Excellent work!
katiebug0410 chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Dang I'm not your first review...oh well, at least I'm your first fav and follower ;) 3
GavinWilliamsAuthor chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
Wow, this is a moving and brilliantly written metaphor for life. I truly enjoyed reading this, well done on a fantastic short story.

I hope you don't mind, but I was a little confused by this line: To keep it from the mercy of the world, she had to leave it at her own. If the world is so cruel to her heart, is she not the one showing the mercy, not the world?