Reviews for The Girl and Her Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poetically angst-y and beautifully-written, the piece captures and conveys hurt and fragility with brutal effectiveness. 10/10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so beautiful and heartbreaking, a perfect metaphor for what can happen when we hide our true selves. Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang I'm not your first review...oh well, at least I'm your first fav and follower ;) 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is a moving and brilliantly written metaphor for life. I truly enjoyed reading this, well done on a fantastic short story. I hope you don't mind, but I was a little confused by this line: To keep it from the mercy of the world, she had to leave it at her own. If the world is so cruel to her heart, is she not the one showing the mercy, not the world? |