|Reviews for Unbidden invasion|
| alltheeagles chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Exciting, but clear and easily understood. Well done! I like the idea of energy-based aliens, though I think maybe you could make it a little clearer how 'living' energy is different from non-living forms of energy. Do you mean things like nuclear fission or something?
You didn't give very many details on the physical appearances of the various alien races, but that was fine since the focus of this chapter is on the tactics. It was fun to meet Yakta and Rethellians again, and this time the latter were much more heroic, haha!