Reviews for Innocence
dipsydoodle1 chapter 8 . 5/27/2017
Loser mother. Sweet goodbye between Levi and Louise.
K chapter 7 . 5/25/2017
This is going good, my only suggestion would be not to repeat chapter content (6 and 7 were the same, just different POVs). As a reader I ended up skimming 7 a bit because I'd already read the scene in the previous chapter and just wanted to get on to what happens next in the story instead of seeing a rehash of the scene. There are ways to show what both characters felt about things such as in a new chapter having one briefly reflect here and there and what happened in a previous one. But I like your characterizations and writing style.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/21/2017
Loving where this is going. Keep up the good work.
debcass67 chapter 3 . 5/4/2017
loving the story so far, please update soon :)
Honestly Yours chapter 3 . 5/4/2017
More more more please! I like this story a lot.
dipsydoodle1 chapter 3 . 5/4/2017
Like this story so far!