Reviews for A To Z |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely message, and especially important at this time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the cohesion of the imagery of using both "close-knit" and "entwined." It makes the metaphor feel more specific and tangible, bringing a sense of physicality to these expressions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So true. I don't have much idea about haikus but I searched it on Internet :'P Peace is much understood and valued after we we know what being tired really means... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! They are all so great! Also, I was glad to help. (A bit ltae, lol :p) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! sorry I havn't been reading lately. :( This is great! |
![]() ![]() for the third one, or the second butterfly... line two has eight syllables, and it's supposed to have seven. otherwise that one is my favorite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmmm, family is all about about creating bonds if you think about it. The most bond - thats what family is. "Twixt parent and child" - A nice sounding line, though I don't exactly know what twixt means. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the Poems! They're very short but they hold a lot of meaning and thought. Also the idea behind this series of poems is quite creative. Nice work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the message of this haiku. Strange how hierachy places more importance on lineage than one's actions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Flowing in rivers from the Confines of the soul" would make an excellent line for a poem. Nice use of imagery there - feelings are said to be flooding after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The second one. Grief fits better than wrong I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah, this could be the dictionary definition of eager. |
![]() ![]() ![]() True, true. Fathers are often looked up as role models. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Direct and Brutal this one is. I agree. Children are the ultimate test of one's love after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the first butterfly haiku. "Many colours dance" just seems like a better ending. |