Reviews for Humans vs Robots: 2073
J.Kuzzey chapter 2 . 5/21/2017
Short chapter but good overall. Only thing I would suggest is putting thoughts into italics or like this: 'thought,' just so the break in voice is clearer.
J.Kuzzey chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
I know pretty much nothing about Overwatch so I'm going into this with a clean slate!
Interesting concept and beginning piece here. I'm a sucker for robots. I also really enjoy war stories and sci-fi, so this looks like something I would enjoy. Your writing is good! I didn't notice any mistakes. The narrator has a clear voice in this chapter (I know you said the POV will switch next chapter, so I'm curious to see how this story feels told like that). Good flow and pacing so far. Looking forward to reading more