Reviews for I wish you could stay with me
pastryninja chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
I could feel the wistfulness and longing; and felt sad for the speaker at the last line (which was a great ending). I also like your use of repetition.
deliriousdreams chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
This is so beautifully written! I like how, as a reader, you can decide yourself who the one you want to stay with you is. You put a lot of emotions and feelings into this and it definitely reflects. You did an amazing jobs, thank you for sharing!