Reviews for Heaven on Earth
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
Well... I suppose calling this "Trouble in Paradise" would be an understatement.

This story is creepy because it could so easily happen in our world. Not knowing whether your enemies are truly your enemies or if they are truly innocent, a crazy regime that inspires die hard loyalty and can pick and choose who the 'Disloyal people' are to be killed without question.

Paradise does come at a cost, and this story makes me dread it.

Great job and this was a thrilling read! :)