|Reviews for Scarf of Ue'cvis|
| Bow-Gun chapter 1 . 2/5
I would say this directly without any sugarcoating that your story has a lot of info dump. I have to force myself to read a few paragraphs and I still don't know what am I reading about. As someone who does the same, I am really impressed that you have written so much. I hope to see this story being rewritten with better pacing and structure.