Reviews for Totalitarian
Guest chapter 13 . 10/3/2017
You're back! I was shocked to see that your stories have been updated! It's been, what, two months?

I love the action at the start of the chapter and how real it felt. North's struggles really hit me and I love how she willing to risk her own life to save those who she really cares about. I am looking forward to more!
MileyRowling chapter 13 . 10/3/2017
I loved this!
MileyRowling chapter 12 . 9/26/2017
Great work!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/15/2017
What an amazing last few chapters! I really like how quickly the story is moving along!
MileyRowling chapter 11 . 8/10/2017
Nice one!
MileyRowling chapter 10 . 8/3/2017
Really good stuff!
Prime Jeremy chapter 6 . 8/3/2017
I wonder how they'll get out of this
Prime Jeremy chapter 5 . 8/3/2017
I hope they make it
Prime Jeremy chapter 4 . 8/3/2017
well this isn't good
Prime Jeremy chapter 3 . 8/3/2017
Looks like I was wrong.
Prime Jeremy chapter 2 . 8/3/2017
I bet the rock is going to break it.
Prime Jeremy chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
reminds me of the Japanese.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/31/2017
I find the newspaper clippings to be a nice touch to the story. It adds more of a real feeling than the notebook did in the first book. I don't know how else to put it. It just seems to make the world seem more real.
MileyRowling chapter 9 . 7/31/2017
Great update!
Guest chapter 8 . 7/24/2017
Great update! I really like how fast moving this is!
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