|Reviews for Found You First|
| failte200 chapter 1 . 3/5
Whoa. Didn't see THAT twist coming... At first I was all "ah, typical seme/uke fic" but then it all got up-ended little by little until it was entirely reversed. Good job. Good f'in job.
Couple of places could've used a beta-reader, and I dare you to count how many times you said "jaw tightened". You really like that phrase, don'tcha... Saw it a lot in the other fic too. I don't even know what it means. How does one tighten one's jaw?
Oh, and also: your chars can say it, but the narrator should really know that "sorta" isn't a word... Just nits. Still have wet eyes anyway.
| rAiNwAtEr1 chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I loved this, thanks for sharing.
| I am sorry chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
For a moment there I thought there wouldn't be happy ending, but I am happy there was. Jake and Bishop found each other first so they did deserve it.
I like your writing.
| Seiko Tanuki chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
So much feels (:
I've yet to read any of your other works, but after this, I know got to :)
Thnx for this and keep these coming!
| Saint Wilde chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
My god this was beautiful.