Reviews for Found You First |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this multiple times and favorited it a long time ago. can't believe i never reviewed. it's so so so incredibly good. perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Didn't see THAT twist coming... At first I was all "ah, typical seme/uke fic" but then it all got up-ended little by little until it was entirely reversed. Good job. Good f'in job. Couple of places could've used a beta-reader, and I dare you to count how many times you said "jaw tightened". You really like that phrase, don'tcha... Saw it a lot in the other fic too. I don't even know what it means. How does one tighten one's jaw? Oh, and also: your chars can say it, but the narrator should really know that "sorta" isn't a word... Just nits. Still have wet eyes anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this, thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() For a moment there I thought there wouldn't be happy ending, but I am happy there was. Jake and Bishop found each other first so they did deserve it. I like your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much feels (: I've yet to read any of your other works, but after this, I know got to :) Thnx for this and keep these coming! -SAY子- |
![]() ![]() ![]() My god this was beautiful. |