Reviews for Without Her
KaeNicole chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
I actually really like this story and I think you portrayed the subject of heartbreak really well. I know what it feels like from first hand experience and I'm guessing you know what it feels like too based on how well you wrote this. I actually felt really bad for the main character and the two children that Diana left behind. Are you going to continue writing this? I would love to see more. :-)
I am inactive chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
The summary sounds really good. It's a pity about the way the page turned out, but it's not your fault.
clairisa23 chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
Very good intro to your bio very honest. But what happend to your page maybe something went wrong. Fictionpress does that sometimes that's why I typed my docs manuelly or copy & past them. But anyway I can't wait for the next chapter:).