|Reviews for Untamed|
| The Youngest Mistress chapter 1 . 1/9/2019
I like how you detailed it; those gypsy ladies reminded me of that one woman from 'The Hunchback of Notredame'. I also like Crow's mask, it's something I would like to draw on a canvas. I don't see any faults with this, but the ammo from crossbows are called 'bolts', not arrows. Other than that, it's very, very, neat. I wonder whatever became of Crow's family and what his fate will be.
Good luck, The Youngest Mistress.