Reviews for Dead Girl
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Sir Scott chapter 3 . 7/1/2017
Nice update. I like her tiger and the fight scene was nice.
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
You have a pretty good handle on what parts of the story are actually interesting. A lot of telling and no showing, but I'm assuming the rest of the story isn't like the prologue.
Sir Scott chapter 2 . 6/24/2017
Pretty good update. I will be glad to read how the zombies came to be. That's an interesting idea to let your readers come up with a character.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
Pretty good prologue. It makes me want to read more. Good luck.
~Sir Scott