Reviews for The Brave and the Bold
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
I especially liked the bits where their narrative echoed each other's eg the 'prizes and parade' line. That was some cool writing! The plot is zany but then hey, this is based on a comic book so that should be expected. It's not the kind of thing I usually read, but this was a fun experience for me. In the end though, I can still feel that dark streak underneath the jokes - the Shadow in particular isn't a happy character, I feel.
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
Punctuation needs work...Although that might just be Fictionpress's editor problems.
I suggest putting this on Wattpad, this looks like it would fit better there.