|Reviews for Apple of Her Eye|
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
Nice. At first I was confused as to who's viewpoint it was, but that was quickly revealed and I understood. I'd be interested in what sort of melody you might put to these words!
| I am inactive chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
That was really good, it sounds like something that should be on the charts!