|Reviews for Nightmears are Dreams too|
| FairyTayle chapter 1 . 7/29
No offence, but maybe you should stick to writing Chinese. Or learn more English before writing fiction. I'm not trying to be mean — far from it — but some people just can't bear to read fiction with bad grammar. I, personally, am one of those people.
My best wishes,
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/30
There appear to be some grammar and spelling mistakes.
What is a "signal tear?"
Who is "Anothy?"
It's "Your mom and dad are gone."
What is a "cold hatred child?"
The post-dream paragraph screams of Mary Sue.
The ones before also scream of Mary Sue. Look up and take the Mary Sue Litmus Test, if you have time. It's very helpful for seeing if your character is a little too perfect wish fulfillment ridiculous.
Until then, this is the 98%.