|Reviews for Rewind|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
This is a really solid start! The flow of the story is really solid, and only get a little hiccupy at the very start (perhaps a rewording of the years and ages in the first sentences would help?) and when her sister so adamantly refuses to do anything but walk down the creepy dangerous path. Perhaps they could be running late? Something to give your main character a reason for not being equally stubborn about not going somewhere clearly dangerous.
I hope you continue in time. This is really solid!