|Reviews for Living Legends|
| deactivated0917 chapter 3 . 9/6
Another good chapter! Things are starting to escalate, yay. Well, maybe not so yay for the characters, but anyway...
| ElvenValar chapter 2 . 8/24
| ElvenValar chapter 1 . 8/24
| deactivated0917 chapter 2 . 7/19
"Between ancient gods, who are immortal and probably have anger management issues?"
That part made me laugh. That is all. :)
| deactivated0917 chapter 1 . 7/19
I'm glad I finally had the time to read this, albeit a little late. This is a really good start! I love the concept you have going on here.
One thing I will say is that you could've maybe fleshed this out a little more, though. Specifically, the part where the swan approaches Ellinor. I feel like it would be a little more realistic if you dragged it out a bit and added more hesitation from Ellinor's side instead of having her readily willing to accept what's happening so quickly. It would be nice to read more of the shock and questions going on in her mind, I guess is what I mean to say. Does that make sense?
Other than that, like I said, this is good. :)
P.S. I never realized until now how similar Norwegian is to Swedish... I understood most of what was written without the translations at the bottom, haha. That's pretty cool!
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 7/1
Every culture? That is quite an undertaking. Good luck.
A few typos, most of, them, with, commas and "in the dialogue."
Otherwise it's an okay start.
P.S.-What the hell is your profile page