|Reviews for Cuddles after a Scare|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
That's very cute! A shame she made him wait especially after putting the lingerie on. That doesn't seem fair!
My usual requests for more attention to punctuation aside (missing quite a few periods at the end of sentences; dialogue tags need corrected), this was solid and very cute. It really hit stride when they were together.
| alltheeagles chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
Awwwwwwwwww...*holds that for three minutes*
Well, this is a much more grown up story from you, and not just because they were sharing a bed with one of them in a sexy(I suppose?) nightgown. :P The tone of it was more mature, and there were things like motivational talks (implying a career) and finance management, all things that the typical live for the moment teenager wouldn't be having even the slightest thought about. I wonder if this has anything to do with SOMEBODY's brand-new status as income-earning adult? :)))