|Reviews for Sailing Away|
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
The opening part did the character's feelings across, although I feel you layed it on a little thick.
If you want to write a move script, then just write it in script form. I still read those.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
Yay, She's finally happy!
I really liked how you had Arianna reflect on her life and How boring and meaningless it had become until she met her alien, and I agree with you. When nothing ties you down sometimes running away is the best choice.
Amazing job and a great story! I can't wait to see what you write next!
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
Nice one shot here. I wish I knew more of what your alien character (and Arianna for that matter) looked like. What his ship looked like.
I wish there was more, but it's solid as it is. Well done.