|Reviews for Pup Finds Hope|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
I find all the air quotes around street names and personal descriptions/tendencies to be very distracting. Names don't need them, and descriptions should just be described. Air quotes show a sassy narrator, but these don't seem to be used sarcastically.
I like the way you set up the change. I hope your character learns something from his transformation!