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Morrowseer chapter 7 . 12/6/2018
Is this just a collection of poems?
Me again chapter 51 . 10/22/2018
A lovely end to a lovely story 3 Your love of the ocean really shines through - I could feel every sensation of being on the beach!
Me againYa girl chapter 50 . 10/18/2018
You angel of writing. Gosh I can’t wait to see you. We’re gonna trade manuscripts in person before the year is out, and that’s my solemn promise.
Me chapter 49 . 10/18/2018
Wow. Just wow. Stunning and beautiful and utterly satisfying
allbookmonkey chapter 50 . 10/17/2018
Your writing is amazing. It's so descriptive, and has a mature quality that's hard to find in other stories. In some places in the story it seems like a little too much fluff (like when they're not doing much other than waiting or sitting there), but other than that, this story reflects a lot of effort and reflection. Well done! :)
EventualHorizon chapter 49 . 10/16/2018
While I hate to see this story end I am very happy at how it is ending. Thanks again for sharing it with us :)
EventualHorizon chapter 48 . 8/30/2018
Thanks for the update. I am looking forward to the next chapter :)
Me crying ed chapter 47 . 8/16/2018
Well, what a place to get caught up with. The final fight was huge and magical and totally different than everything that happened in the mountain. Ky ripping her hair out was brutal, and the sword shattering was stunning. So glad Sil is gone and wow I just want Ember to wake up now
Me again chapter 45 . 8/16/2018
Ohhh that was a very good fight scene. Brutal and scrappy and scary.
Me again chapter 44 . 8/16/2018
Maggie chapter 43 . 8/16/2018
Holy crap I wish I'd read this sooner, this is AMAZING! Girl you knocked it out of the park, it's so satisfying to finally understand what all this mess is about. I loved the description of her story telling and how everything fell into place and wow.
RunnerQuest chapter 46 . 7/29/2018
I finally caught up! Awww this is SO GOOD! That battle with Sil at the end was so fun to read! This story of yours has got a dash of everything (adventure, drama, love — I’m looking at you, Ember and Ky!) I’m on pins and needles waiting for your next chapter! You’ve got an incredible talent with story telling and I can’t wait to see how this ends!
RunnerQuest chapter 21 . 7/18/2018
Hey there! I just reached chapter 21 and I am in love with Ember and Ky! So glad that they are partners in crime again, ready to escape the mountain! You’re writing is gorgeous and each chapter is such a thrill to read! Slowly but surely I’m making my way through this story (by cramming in time after working, mowing, doing laundry etc)! Seriously you are awesome! Keep up the amazing work!
Syntaxis chapter 44 . 7/8/2018
Hello again! I do hope you remember me from the review I wrote a few months ago. It shames me to admit I allowed other distractions to cause me to fall behind on your story. Rest assured, though, that I am now caught up!

As I said in my first review, what you're offering to us here on FictionPress is frankly more than we deserve. To think that such a fine story exists hidden away in this little corner of the internet boggles the mind. I feel as if I am part of some secret club that has the incredible fortune to read this gem. And selfishly I'm almost glad so few people know of it, as that means I have something of great value others do not. The tale of Ember and Kyveli twists and undulates as a magnificent braid where each single strand holds some poignant reflection on our humanity, on what it truly means to feel. You've given us two characters who could not have come from more different worlds, but in reality they are not so different people after all. They crave the same things, feel the same emotions, experience similar pains. While Ky struggles fill the soulless void in her heart, Ember seeks to save her himself, to show her that she is not a monster. I can think of little more compelling than a creature who deep inside hates who she is learning slowly (I hope) that it is not wrong for her to love and be loved in return.

What is more human than love? And upon learning that sirens were once human themselves, I am left to believe you want to tell a story about choice. The choice to love rather than destroy. When I read your book, I am reminded that we are made better by what we share with others. Together, Ember and Ky are more than they are alone. In fact, the idea of loneliness is major theme in this story. The solitude of the main characters, both outcasts. The lonely mountain through which they travel. Sirens themselves, cursed and without souls. Much of the world you've created is a shell of what it once was, the dust and shadow left behind by a forgotten age of wonder. The world is stunningly beautiful in its dilapidated ruin. You show us so much by explaining so little. Your worldbuilding is exquisite; you've crafted a place unlike any other fantasy setting, and all without orcs or elves or dragons. The setting is so unique that I believe it deserves its own category. We have high and low fantasy, urban and gothic, etc. I dub yours "Folkpunk." A refreshing marriage of mysticism, folklore, and fantasy noir.

Upsy Daisy, whoever you may be, the world of literature is better place because of you. Please never forget that. You are the best writer I've ever encountered on FictionPress. Your words sing. One day, I hope to walk into a bookstore and find your familiar style there, exactly where it should be, cherished by people far and wide.

With great respect,
EventualHorizon chapter 44 . 7/5/2018
I haven't reviewed this story nearly as often as it deserves. I have enjoyed reading them all and am looking forward to the rest of the story.
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