|Reviews for The Hell Series|
| GoddessFourWinds chapter 1 . 9/6
And...No, thank you!
Not that I believe in this kind of afterlife if there is one, but yeah, no. Unless I get to be a demon and choose my playthings. :)
| Rhuen chapter 1 . 7/8
To make a note:
the first six chapters of this series are extremely old works, which were never previously posted on Fiction press and in fact some parts may be missing (permanently lost due to old computers and down sites), they stand however as the oldest things still surviving that I ever wrote related to this timeline.
technically, (The Letter of Edward Conners) could just as easily been the first chapter of the series; however this series is a combined series, the chronologically ordered events of this single continuity (including Emily's Awesome Adventure, and the Haunted series) making their cross over interactions a little more comprehensible when posted here in order.
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 7/7
Was this intended to be written as a script?
You could have written it as a script. I would have read it in script form.
As it is, there are so many punctuation issues I couldn't make myself read to the end.