|Reviews for Desiderata|
| Ahren nightshade chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
thank you I will need to show this to people who don't understand this topic, you write wonderfully
| Dreamarcher chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Well I'm white and an egalitarian- bite me lol! I am sympathetic to the plight of other races. But you could call me a bigot for not tolerating people of any colour who carry a chip on their shoulder and want to hate me just for being born who I am. I am impatient with a society that won't allow everyone in the world to have equal opportunity no matter how they find their way to have it (so long as no one it harmed in the process). That being said if I got what I wished for do I want to leave my comfort zone to change the status quo? I also want to know when everyone will stop whining about the past and start fresh. Maybe when everyone realizes that we all suffer from what each of our own minds have created. But this was supposed to be a review - well I think this chapter did what you wanted it to do and prompted me to want to debate.
| 02lovecat chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
| 02lovecat chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
Woah. This was epic!
| Amy Joffrion chapter 2 . 7/25/2017
I like your way of thinking. Your English teacher must've been thoroughly impressed.