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Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 7/11/2017 This was full of heart. I like the characters, they feel real with human imperfections and their own ways of meshing together. The only thing I would suggest is maybe put the text messages in bold letters so they're easier to understand. C: I'll meet you at the party. Is that cool? J: Yeah, that's cool. Other than that, well done and keep up the good work. |