Reviews for Unwound
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
This was full of heart.
I like the characters, they feel real with human imperfections and their own ways of meshing together.
The only thing I would suggest is maybe put the text messages in bold letters so they're easier to understand.
C: I'll meet you at the party. Is that cool?
J: Yeah, that's cool.
Other than that, well done and keep up the good work.