|Reviews for Be, My Spirit|
| The Writer of Whitewater chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
I like the nihilistic take on reality, along with the idea that madness makes you sane. I suppose, in a way, it does, what with needing darkness for light and all that.
There is an interesting half-rhyme with "nothing" and "freefalling;" I think it could be quite effective to move these words closer together. Perhaps you could have a faint rhyme in the background for additional *zing*.