|Reviews for Off my Shoulders|
| Archia chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
This was really great to read. It reminds me of a story I was told when I was young, where as a person grew closer to Jesus they learnt to let them take their burden and they were relieved of the heavy weight on their back. I really liked how your poem reminded me of that, and what your poem was saying. It can be a hard thing to learn to let go and trust but it's a great thing. I really enjoyed your poem and there was a great message behind it.