I appreciate that Sadie isn't described as blonde, not that she isn't conventionally attrative but yeah. I also like how Rory slightly calls out Dan when he calls Amy shallow just cause she's a cheerleader.

Huh. For some reason I picture Mrs Raven as Morticia Addams.

It's nice, how they can work it out together. A lot better than endless arguing and screaming and will they won't they, I guess.

Cool, would be nice to learn more about goth subculture like lolita goth and white goth etc. Maybe just "Tlingit" would work instead of the "Indian" included afterwards? Though I'm not native myself so I wouldn't know if they use that term. Good luck!

This sounds cool and I love all Ravens to death but the rhyming rape poem kind of felt...weird. Not that it couldn't have been written by a teenage jock, but still. That's all.