Reviews for The Ice Dancer
meteomage chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
It would have been interesting if you had it kind of like a riddle, and didn't tell people it was a pencil until the end. I suck at riddles, and probably wouldn't have gotten it, but would have probably had fun trying to guess it.

Personification isn't used often, and I really enjoyed this!
Jaya Avendel chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
Very well done. Whoever was writing upped and went away. I shall always feel sorry for my pen when I put it down now.

The poem held good imagery and feeling. It also showed me something I never once thought about.
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
Surprisingly very deep.
And I who was expecting an ice skating poem. Baka.
ShimmeringDewdrops chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
This was really creative! I mean comparing a pencil to an ice dancer - so clever! You wrote it very poetically too. Well done!