Reviews for Sandcastle
total.boron chapter 10 . 8/16/2017
If I was Hugh and I wanted my son to stay away from gang stuff, putting him in the midst of it would be the last thing I'd do. Somehow I get the feeling that once you're involved you never really get out, but at least Marcel seems determined to drop it all. I also get the feeling that Kailey is somehow in on the whole thing, judging by how surprised she was to see James and her nonchalant "Yeah. Maybe" when he blew her off. But perhaps I'm just reading into things too much...

Giles is being a tricky bugger as well. I can understand why James feels hurt, having worked for Giles for so long, but at the same time he should also know that you can't really place your whole trust in anyone in that business.

Looking forward to the next update! :)
Dokun888 chapter 9 . 8/15/2017
While the plot was really moving here I found this chapter real sweet *-* XD James acting like housewife . I really like the contrast there XD Viking is such a charmer XDD and I can't wait to read about their visit to the cop *,,,,* XDD
total.boron chapter 9 . 8/14/2017
Phew, long chapter, but excellent as always! I was kinda dreading this chapter because I thought something awful was going to happen to Marcel, so thank god he got out relatively okay. But there's still a good chunk of the story left, so everything might not turn out so peachy...

And what a plot twist with Giles! Seriously did not see that coming and like James I'm having a hard time coming to terms with it! Speaking of James...I'm now kinda hoping that him and Viking will end up in a relationship, although I still think it would be pretty dysfunctional. But who knows, perhaps they could work things out. My main fear now is that something REALLY bad happens between them (no idea what) that would ruin their relationship.
Dokun888 chapter 8 . 8/12/2017
Marcel is growing on me XDDD those two need him to cheer up a bit XD and Marcel asked questions I wanted answered so he's good XD their ages are pretty close to what I thought although I didn't think Viking would be older XD anyways, I liked when Marcel imagined them together and thought that James would top lol I can't wait for him to find out the truth. Visually XDD that is if you plan for him to find out at all v.v Thanks for the chapter *-*
Verosity chapter 8 . 8/11/2017
Marcel just doesn't know how to shut up haha I love it!
This is so interesting, can't wait for the next update :)
total.boron chapter 8 . 8/11/2017
My god, Marcel is a ballsy kid. He seemed way too comfortable with James and Viking to begin with, although the conversation in the car cracked me right up. "Malteser anyone?" just felt so familiar, because it's what I'd do if I was driving with friends, but it felt so comically out-of-place here. And to ask James and Viking all the details about being in prison and if they'd gotten off with anyone! I'm kind of glad his mood sobered up by the time they got to York. He seems like the kind of person who doesn't realise what shit they're in until they're properly in it. Anyway, it'll be interesting to see how this meeting goes...hopefully Marcel won't have to play the role of getaway driver!
Dokun888 chapter 7 . 8/9/2017
Thanks for the chapter *-* had to double check if the story hadn't a threesome warning lol Marcel seems okay a bit wimpy compared to James and Viking tho XD I think their trip is gonna be fun XDD
total.boron chapter 7 . 8/9/2017
Marcel has returned! Honestly, whenever I read his name I think of the monkey from Friends, but I'm gonna have to stop that if he's going to be in ensuing chapters. Also, I laughed when Marcel used Henry Cavill as an example of peak male attractiveness, because let's be honest, who would refuse Henry Cavill? If I was in a particular mood, I'd sell my own grandma just to be able to breathe the same air as him.

And I can see it turning out badly for James, giving Kailey a key to his flat. Things seem to be getting more serious (if that's the right word) with Viking now, since Viking is comfortable enough to be talking about inane stuff like who he goes to the gym with.

Overall, excellent chapter :) Looking forward to the next one!
Verosity chapter 6 . 8/8/2017
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
total.boron chapter 6 . 8/7/2017
This was probably my favourite chapter so far, because the opening gives a glimpse of what it might be like if James and Viking were actually in a relationship. I don't think either of them want a relationship any time soon, but it makes you wonder how they'd actually be together. Although I'm not sure how functional that relationship would really be...

I can understand James' anxiety about things though, especially about meeting with Kailey later. I don't doubt that things could turn nasty for him if people found out about his shenanigans. Also, I wonder how things are going to go in York...obviously they're not in for a completely smooth ride, but I wonder what the first spanner in the works will be.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/6/2017
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
total.boron chapter 5 . 8/5/2017
When I saw "surplus profanity" at the beginning of this chapter, I knew I was going to love it. And by golly, this chapter was amazing. I didn't expect this to happen to so soon, but I'm definitely not complaining. I was somewhat accurate with my prediction though - James was a bit a reluctant at the beginning, but Viking knew exactly how to coax things out of him. I also liked that fact that it was almost Viking's primary goal to please James and find out what HE liked, although obviously that lead to a better time for Viking too.

Anyway, things are certainly getting spicy. Awesome chapter!
total.boron chapter 4 . 8/5/2017
Yet again, I loved this chapter! There's honestly nothing juicier than mutual pining when neither party are aware of it. I eagerly await the day Viking and James find out about each other, although I suspect there will be much reluctance to admit anything. I liked James' interaction with the gym guy as well. Fair play, the guy was persistent and James wasn't exactly rude when he told him it wasn't going to happen.

I shall get straight on to the next chapter!
Dokun888 chapter 5 . 8/4/2017
Oh boy XDD this chapter ,, I didn't think a hairy ass would sound sexy to me. Like ever XDD I think Viking makes everything sound hot to me no matter what lol but I'm not sure I get what James is into yet XDDD anyways, I'm glad they finally got to it and thanks for the update *-*
endlessangels chapter 3 . 7/31/2017
Ahhhh I missed reading Friday's update! Lucky me, though. I got to read them all in one shot! I absolutely love how their dynamic is developing (That's assuming James and Viking get together). I can't wait to read the next chapters! Thanks for posting your stuff :)
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