Reviews for Manila
ambethiiii chapter 1 . 4/20/2021
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
DWest chapter 1 . 4/11/2021
After reading a good story like this one, I can't help but suggest that you should join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
JGil chapter 1 . 4/4/2021
You can publish this in a mobile app so a lot of readers can see your lovely work. Check on NovelStar and see how other writers earn by pursuing their passion in writing.
Purplecat chapter 1 . 5/1/2019
Thank you for another well written story.

I so wish the three stories were numbered in some way so they could have been read in the correct order.

Thank you.
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
I don't often see the Philippines getting used as a story location, at least not for long. And never as a title. Interesting.

Slight issues with punctuation in the dialogue.
The writing and dialogue both seem...stiff. Most of it passes off fine. Look up the As You Know trope.
That kind of forced-sounding exposition.

Still gonna follow it.