Reviews for Shadow of the Vampire
Notabot chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
Hahaha, good dark stuff. This story was surprisingly better than the ones on Wattpad lol.
Timbo Slice chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
I really liked the style of this, it's reminiscent of Van Hellsing, old timey vampire slaying is a rich lore that doesn't get much exposure nowadays so it was cool to see you take the writing prompt and turn it into something unique and your own. The description of the vampires lair was great as you managed to capture the sense of foreboding and darkness of the edifice through vivid writing "like a clutching claw against the sky" and how the village seemed to cower in its presence. I also liked how you worked in nods to your previous works in the mentioning of Kori and Erika, it's gives this piece more depth than just the one shot shows. This story could definitely be expanded on if you wanted, great work!