Reviews for The Downward Spiral of Adam Keir
Shadow Soul Blue chapter 2 . 9/7/2017
Hey. I love the chapter! The characters are still excellent and the writing's perfect! Keep it up!
Marina x Machina chapter 4 . 9/7/2017
Poor Adam...
Marina x Machina chapter 3 . 9/3/2017
Ooo. Please update soon.
Marina x Machina chapter 2 . 9/3/2017
Good setup with Larisa and Evelyn, I like how the female characters seem somewhat off but you don't get the feeling that all women are supposed to be that way, it's just how these two characters are. Adam's responses are also perfectly constructed. Good work!
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
Sounds promising. I like how the edgy intro turns out to be one of Adam's discarded pitches and how Adam's description of strange chidlike happiness might correlate to describe Evelyn. To be honest I skipped through the first time but now that I came back to reread this, it is pretty good at setting up what you have to know and foreshadowing what is to happen.
Shadow Soul Blue chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
Hey, just want to say that this story's great! The writing and characters are written fantastically. I will say that it's a bit long IMO, but regardless I love the story and I hope you continue on! -Kevlar Spirit