Reviews for The Downward Spiral of Adam Keir
Kevlar Spirit chapter 2 . 9/7
Hey. I love the chapter! The characters are still excellent and the writing's perfect! Keep it up!
Marina x Machina chapter 4 . 9/7
Poor Adam...
Marina x Machina chapter 3 . 9/3
Ooo. Please update soon.
Marina x Machina chapter 2 . 9/3
Good setup with Larisa and Evelyn, I like how the female characters seem somewhat off but you don't get the feeling that all women are supposed to be that way, it's just how these two characters are. Adam's responses are also perfectly constructed. Good work!
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 9/3
Sounds promising. I like how the edgy intro turns out to be one of Adam's discarded pitches and how Adam's description of strange chidlike happiness might correlate to describe Evelyn. To be honest I skipped through the first time but now that I came back to reread this, it is pretty good at setting up what you have to know and foreshadowing what is to happen.
Kevlar Spirit chapter 1 . 8/22
Hey, just want to say that this story's great! The writing and characters are written fantastically. I will say that it's a bit long IMO, but regardless I love the story and I hope you continue on! -Kevlar Spirit