Reviews for The Call Centre Heroes
i prune chapter 30 . 12/17/2017
Sorry i haven't been around!
If thats the ending, its pretty good but not what i was expecting. Didn't know danny was gonna go psycho, and i think the last few chapters were a little underwhelming compared to the rest of the sstory, but the writing was still very good.
Thanks for this brilliant read and i hope more people notice it and read it!
i prune chapter 23 . 11/16/2017
Well that was unexpected! Didn't think they would actually fight, or that the kids had been there before, or that the previous heroes had (possibly) been killed!
Honestly, i have no idea where this wil go next!
Also, you might wanna proofread the chapters if you don't already, or get someone else to proofread them, as I've seen quite a few mistakes where you've left a word out or somethinf similar in recdnt chapters.
Thanks, and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 19 . 10/30/2017
This is some really good stuff, you're really at the level of good authors already and this story is really enjoyable.
Altlantic Gold Crew vs DRA huh? The first has got better teamwork, especially after all that training, but the second has a lot more planning.
Can't wait to see what happens when they meet!
Thanks and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 16 . 10/16/2017
Ohhhh boyyyy things are starting to heat up!
The atlantic gold crew are finally getting some training and teamwork through their mutual hate, and Danny and his gang are coming up to rival them in saving people, which shouldn't be hard as they are a much betted team than the other two.
Can't wait to see what happens when they clash!
Thanks and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 13 . 10/3/2017
So the guys up north have decided they dont like being superheroes, and danny and his gang have decided to go vilgilante...seems each group will swap roles!
Personally, i still think they should go into crime.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 11 . 9/27/2017
Ooh a crime to fight! Albeit a small one.
I like the name Atlantic Gold Crew. Sounds more like a heist gang than superheroes. I really think they should have become the former rather than the latter.
Danny is getting on well, i predict he becomes the main antagonist later on.
More heroes with powers to come? Hopefully!
Finally, thanks for having a schedule you stick to, its really great.
Thanks and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 9 . 9/20/2017
Well that was a bit dramatic lol
you might want to check the formatting too
i wonder, either danny allies with the rebels, or he tries to leave them, maybe find his ex-colleagues, or maybe he develops powers of his own?
Thanks and keep up the good work!
i prune chapter 7 . 9/12/2017
Nice story, good luck cleaning up glasgow.