Reviews for Blue
Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 8/25/2017
The summary certainly captured my attention. I like what you've written. However, honestly this feels like snippets of a story - the storyline was a bit hard to follow at first (I think it was being thrown from the wildfire and into Diana's fear that disoriented me). The more I read it, however, the more I like it. :) The characters are good - not over-the-top or cliched, and they've each got their own characteristics (they're not flat) but could do with a little more description so we know what they look like. ;)