|Reviews for Hunter and Hunted|
| Torey Hylton chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
That was very scary and very weird, a great little horror story. There were a few spelling mistakes but I tend to notice them, when most people don't. Even published novels have spelling mistakes in them, so don't worry about that. Also, and this is something I'm trying to avoid myself, try not to start most paragraphs or especially ones that follow another, with your characters name. Try using 'he' or 'his' or try to verse your paragraphs differently. It can be hard, especially when you're used to doing it, but think of it as a challenge. That's what I'm doing. In the end, it'll just make us better writers :)
| Gizmo Burns chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
Oh Man, This is great so far!