Reviews for Characters
Ruby Casablanca chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
"I formally apologize to characters I've met, to ignorantly burn through them like Camel cigarettes," those lines...there is something about those lines that I love. They just flow so wonderfully and the near rhyme gives it a melodic sound. Wonderful, just wonderful. Great job with this! I really enjoyed the read.
IronicPuppies chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
yo this is awesome, not only do you have beautifully constructed images and a rhythm to tie them together but it's also a great way to describe the feeling of abandoning half used characters
SecretlySordid chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
This has a hauntingly familiar rhythm to it- slightly disjointed, almost imperceptibly hitched in not quite the right places. It feels like the look in a person's eye as they count the minutes since their last cigarette, desperate but still determined.