Reviews for The Russian Job
DreamsofFlyingAngels chapter 2 . 11/1/2020
I love the all the detail you put into your writing!
DreamsofFlyingAngels chapter 1 . 11/1/2020
Poor Dani! I love the suspense! Feel like I'm hooked on your story already!
ConfigurationSpace chapter 23 . 12/13/2019
I'm impressed with the amount of character development you fit into the past handful of chapters. I really feel for Dani, but I like her more as a character now that I've seen how she responds to adversity. I really respect her grit. I also appreciate that you provided Alexei's perspective in this chapter!
EpsilonEridani chapter 23 . 12/13/2019
It's back! I love this story!
Katherine Story chapter 20 . 7/29/2019
Great story so far! Much enjoyed.
EpsilonEridani chapter 20 . 1/8/2019
Fantastic. I'd love to see the lovemaking scene between these too because I really beieve it with help her see just how much he loves her.
Guest chapter 18 . 9/28/2018
Poor Dani. :( maybe it was alexei’s father behind all of this? Maybe to get back at his son? Hmmm
SilverLining chapter 17 . 7/22/2018
Shit. Look forward to reading about Viktor as an actual person and not a voice on the other line to Alexei.
SilverLining chapter 16 . 7/22/2018
Makes sense since Dani been kept in the dark all this time, she wants to know about the business now she been involved.
SilverLining chapter 15 . 7/22/2018
Just when I was missing Alexei LOL. Dani hasn't but deep down, he's someone to stir up her life again. Just exactly what she needs. Thought she was more of a college freshman so a last year in high school feels weird.
SilverLining chapter 14 . 7/22/2018
Is Dani bored of her life that she wanted to come back to? Miss seeing Alexei around Lol.
SilverLining chapter 12 . 7/22/2018
Wow what an ending to a part...Also this isn't a judgement, but a suggestion, if you don't write sex scenes, you can change your writing to a T, unless there is going to be or gore and all that. Just suggesting because you might appeal to more readers that way.
SilverLining chapter 11 . 7/22/2018
Liked the personal stuff they revealed to each other, more on Alexei's part. Wait, Dani thinks that Alexei is in his mid twenties but how old is he really?
SilverLining chapter 10 . 7/22/2018
So that's what that phone call was about! Did not suspect that Alexei would lend her dad the money even though he is nice enough to do that. Also the plot is heading differently than I predicted! Great job! Though that puts Alexei in a weirder position since he told Dani about himself... I hope he keeps does.
SilverLining chapter 9 . 7/22/2018
Alexei needs to take his phone calls in a locked coat closet because Dani eavesdropped once again. And she is making use of her escape plan, Good for her! Do feel she is missing out on something and her dad really is coming to get her...Something is amiss too?
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