Reviews for The Weight
Dreamarcher chapter 1 . 11/3/2018
Depressing piece but soulful. Glad to see you back writing.
Ckh chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
I like your inconsistent formatting. It enhances the feeling of chaos, which fits the deathly theme of the poem well.

As another reviewer pointed out, this is based on Egyptian mythology, isn't it? With Ammit the devourer and Jackals coming from Egyptian mythos.
atalantea chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
This brings Egyptian mythology to mind. I like the vivid imagery you gave this piece. But I love how concise and condensed it is. It packs quite a punch I think.

I see that your themes have not changed, still dark and painful and subtly sad. But they create beautiful pieces don't they? Anyway keep writing! :)
Marina x Machina chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
Yo just wanted to let you know this looks like it uploaded wrong, but other than that, the sombre and foreboding tones do make for an appropriately ominous piece.