Reviews for XVII |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Evans and Potter? Just so long as you did that on purpose. Jeez, your cliffhangers. Coupled with the grammar...seriously, you could probably get this published professionally (probably, because I'm not part of the publishing industry and couldn't say for sure. But this is great!). |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the perfect cliffhanger ending! I was expecting it because of the summary, but it still had me going *what*! |
![]() ![]() Why have you left this story unattended? Please update it soon it's so good... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This whole concept is just so good! I can't wait for more and hope it comes soon...:) |
![]() ![]() Interesting storyline and characters you've got here. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the story so far! Great job! |
![]() ![]() uwaa I didn't expected them to run together. In thought they wouldn't get caught. talk about plot twist. I hope you're okay, have a happy new year! |
![]() ![]() woah what a good start! I can't wait to read more about them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this it is very intriguing and unique. I need to read more please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this is so good! I seriously can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story so far, And that akward silence at the and, I can feel it. |
![]() ![]() These two are quite the pair. Desperately looking forward to the next updates. Thank you . |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I cannot wait to see what happens next. Wishing you the best on your college apps! Hope you get into the school you want. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice dialogue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know I said this in my previous review but OH MY GOD. I was slightly upset because by the time Charlie was done talking to her mom on the phone I was already half way through the chapter, so I'm standing there like, "Excuse me?" But then she drives to his place and I'm like YES, YES, YES. When the landlady tells her how lil Zeke is such a sweet boy (I caaaan't, I'm gushing over Zeke and it's only been literally three chapters), I'm smiling because now I like him too much for Charlie to arrest his ass. And when they meet again, my jaw was on the floor! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter. Update soon pleaaaaase. I know you in school (same) so I understand, keep up the great work! |