Reviews for XVII |
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![]() ![]() Wow! The encounter between the two soulmates could have been so awkward. If it were me - I would hysterically giggled myself out of the situation. Great updates - thank you so much . I look forward to the rest of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, really like this concept! I haven't been on fictionpress for a long time because I don't really see that many good stories, but this is really good! Waiting for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, the whole back and forth exchanges between them giving each other second chances (her not cuffing him, him tossing her pistol at the very last second) is killing me, I need more. She needs to find his ass through her police connections asap. If they don't meet again within the next two chapters, I'm calling the fbi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was one hell of a first chapter. I must say, I absolutely loved it. Please write MORE! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE KEEP GOING . I literally did not want the chapter to end. Happily looking forward to your updates. Oh hi, by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept! Would like to see where this goes. :) |