Reviews for Train Station Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was funny! Well done, it made me laugh inside. You did a good job at this piece, I quite enjoyed it. It was a simple yet well paced story with a funny twist. Continue writing and I hope more people pick up on your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was funny. The surprise and the way she handled it. Oh too good. I love the kids these days comment. Lord I'm getting to be like that. I enjoyed the details and description of train stations, so wise just like an old lady. Very well done. I really enjoyed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sweet! And thank you for reviewing my poems! Lovin' this, ~Noble |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not exactly humour but I like the lightheartenedness of this short story. Your use of short observations like "I am impressed" do add a tinge of playfulness to the story and stories like this could do more with them. All in all, a charming attempt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this! Unique and a bit different than what I normally see. Nicely written too! I consider it light humor. The last line was especially funny. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it's cute and lighthearted and nicely written, but I dunno if I'd call it 'humour', as such. If you want it to be genuinely funny, it needs a stronger punchline or much more embarrassment for the boy perhaps, like the grandmother really dragging out the scene by doing/saying weird things or something. Depends on what kind of story you want to it to be I suppose, whether you want a proper comedy or just something feelgood and sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "It's a meeting place, a stop on a journey, the end of all, the beginning." That line holds great power and I enjoyed it very much. Poor Trevor; he had a close scrape. Luckily, his grandmother decided today was not the day to embarrass him! |