|Reviews for Ollie Goes to the Coffee Shop|
| InkwellPrincess chapter 1 . 9/18
This was eternally entertaining. Great job :)
| DLSlayton chapter 1 . 9/13
This was a fun read! I also liked the fact that this humorous story teetered toward several potential genres, if it should have ever decided to tilt one way or another, in the direction of horror, mystery, romance, or thriller. Nice job!
I remember only seeing one typo, on the last sentence in the third paragraph from the end. Have a nice day!