|Reviews for Eleutheromania- The Rebel|
| writemystorywithoutink chapter 1 . 9/13
I liked how you went beyond pretty words to tell a proper story in this poem, one that many of our generation might relate to.
| InsomniacOwl chapter 1 . 9/13
I'm a sucker for learning new words, so I clicked on this just because you taught me eleutheromania, thanks for that, it's a beautiful word I'd never heard of. Anyway, I really enjoyed this poem, I think it has a brilliant flow and rhyme scheme, really catchy as I felt myself being drawn into it while I read. There's a lot of great lines in this, but I particularly liked 'like the eight-track in her grandfather's Cadillac' for some reason, it was a really evocative rhyme. Thanks for posting this, it was a good read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck with more writing!