|Reviews for A Random Walk|
| Nitewrite chapter 16 . 12/26/2018
Hi there! I was just passing through and I saw you changed your story description (I think) and I really like it a lot. Hopefully I have time some time soon to finish reading! I forgot how much I liked your characters!
| Anon chapter 14 . 12/22/2017
Hmmm... Was ben lowkey flirting with Twyla? And what will the grimoire reveal? Exciting indeed!
| Nitewrite chapter 11 . 12/8/2017
Great story so far!
| TempestInATeacup chapter 1 . 11/22/2017
This is an interesting start, I love the unique first person perspective on humans, but I really think that the title could have been named something more engaging
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
You've made a very good start. The only thing that confused me was the interaction with Gun Guy ... she walked past the humans to the door, then the gun was at the back of her neck and the man says she was coming right toward him? And she turns to face the class but the gun doesn't leave her neck until Charlie defuses the situation. It just seemed a bit unclear. Looking forward to more! :)
| popopo8 chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
Whoa, write more soon!
| icestars chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
i like the new story so far. interesting first chapter