|Reviews for A Random Walk|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 9/13
You've made a very good start. The only thing that confused me was the interaction with Gun Guy ... she walked past the humans to the door, then the gun was at the back of her neck and the man says she was coming right toward him? And she turns to face the class but the gun doesn't leave her neck until Charlie defuses the situation. It just seemed a bit unclear. Looking forward to more! :)
| popopo8 chapter 1 . 9/13
Whoa, write more soon!
| icestars chapter 1 . 9/13
i like the new story so far. interesting first chapter