Reviews for Red Dawn
Darth Zannacross chapter 14 . 3/25/2023
And time flies once more but, back to the Red Dawn. Got another messy chapter.

Papa wants to keep his son out of the darkness he saw but, Anton might not be able to avoid that.

We broke the 4th wall with a nod to Mob lol.

Looked close but Anton survived that bought of dark rage, well, till the dragon shows up to rip him a new one...doh.

But, still ticking I guess. But, on top of everything we got Tomoyo and Taiki and there weird guide...lets see how crazy things really get.
Starart152 chapter 9 . 3/22/2023
This is a nice chapter where we know what choice Asuka picked, since she could use the sword. It might change later on if she find his name.
The end of the battle was short, but satisfying. As for the end, it already gives a little clue of what the next story might be.
Starart152 chapter 8 . 3/21/2023
This is an interesting chapter where Asuka is really close to her own death while Yuki had to pick what he should do, showing where his morality is.

I like the flow of this chapter as he build a bit of suspense on what happened to asuka, instead of waiting for the next chapter.
Starart152 chapter 7 . 5/15/2022
This is a good chapter that describe Asuka situation as something that she struggled with her normal life. There is also no one really able to guide her so far and has to do many things on her own.
As for the spirit, they seems to be in her way as she is able to physically interact with her.

I like this little bit of lore building you put without having to explain it. It comes from her perspective and I like the way you do it.
Darth Zannacross chapter 13 . 5/14/2022
Been a while since I checked on the Red Dawn but lets see what we have going on over here.

We got corrupt spoiled boys, and possessed girls so seems like we have are hands full here but lets see how things go.
Starart152 chapter 6 . 5/13/2022
This is a nice chapter. I have little to say about it. It was entertaining to see the interactions between the characters and what happened to Asuka at the hospital.
The little thing I was confused at first was who was talking to Harumi on the phone. I knew it was Uncle first, but I didn't realize Yuki grabbed the phone. I think I skip a part by reading too quickly on this part.
dmasterxd chapter 28 . 10/24/2018
It's been a while but glad to finally get back on this story. :) Seems like Taiki is going to have a bigger role in this arc so that's great. I absolutely his interactions with Tomoyo, they are so great, haha. Plus more Harumi too so double yay!

But Yuki's inner demon thing is still really worrying. And it seems like it only gets worse and worse by the chapter. Good chapter! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Zeroalphamus chapter 4 . 9/26/2018
Anton seems like a cutie. So what if he's a ghost?

Though, the hair trigger enmity between Yuki and Asuka seems way too strong. Well, I guess that is to be seen as I catch up...
Zeroalphamus chapter 3 . 9/26/2018

The teenager-angst is cute I have to admit. Asuka seems like a tough cookie, but she's still super innocent! Who are the Naotoris? And why would the govt come for them?
Zeroalphamus chapter 2 . 9/26/2018
Okay, even though I saw it coming...freaky ending.

So, Asuka can see ghosts now? I think things will be heating up. Liked the intro to the family dynamics, tsuge sounds like a horror, and this Honda must be something especial.
Yuki seems like a delight; I ship the frenemy thing a LOT.
Lets see what happens next!
Shang chapter 4 . 9/18/2018
Hmm... I know they weren't friendly from the offset, but the interaction between Asuka and Yuki at the end felt like an extreme shift for the worse. But than, lovers spat is a common thing, I hear :P

A pretty disturbing scene at the end; wonder what exactly that was all about.
By the way - wasn't Anton Volkov a name of Iron Man villain? ; If so, I wonder if there's a connection or if someone will at least point that out :D

A piece of advice: I was told that it's a stylistic mistake to have more than one person speak in the same paragraph. I used to write like that too, but I can see this could be confusing. Perhaps it's worth to watch out for that?

So far: neat story.
Shang chapter 3 . 9/14/2018
Bah; everyone knows Asuka and Yuki are gonna end up together anyway, so why does the redhead bother to fight this? :P Evidentally she has no experience with romance stories :D
Plus, once she's rich, she can just pay Harumi off and everything is fine :D

The cafeteria mix-up caught me a bit by surprise; you could've turned it into a more "full-fledged" comedy scene, but it was fun none the less. Overall a fun chapter, though I still wonder what significance does the chained boy has... I mean his actual existance rarely comes up to the point I tend to forget he's there, but apparently he is. Curious ;)

Nice chapter.
Nerissa-McC chapter 47 . 9/13/2018
Ow, ow, ow! :'( Poor Yuki, with those awful voices taunting him! And yikes, is that cloaked figure going to help him or is it another threat? And poor Asuka, meeting Sakura only to lose her again :(
lirianstar chapter 47 . 9/12/2018

Black Lotus? Heir?

I think some momentous discoveries lies ahead. Given Asuka's appearance, is it safe to assume there was a forbidden romance between the black lotus heir [the one sakura is talking about] and a person from another lotus faction? One who betrayed her?

If so, is sakura confused between this asuka and the first heir when she talks of the warning she gave? I'm not certain, but it seems like yuki may be related to that* person...hence the strange connection between them.

Can't wait for more reveals!
lirianstar chapter 46 . 9/8/2018
Okay, scary!

I think they both are about to recover their memories, and also the mystery of Yuki's past and connection to the Lotusus will come out.

The ending tho. Yikes. o.O
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