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Love how you twisted them around!

(Also, my brain kept trying to mentally reverse EVERYONE'S names. It was quite vexing.)

Um. Yes. Definitely a surprise there. You didn't say how old either was, that I recall, so I sort of pictured...

...never mind.

I am loving this!

I KNEW there was something between Lonna and Feodor!

Now, I'm going to go back to reading, thank you very much for writing this.

I love this! It is amazing. X) You're a great writer and I'd appreciate your input on some of my own work. Please review.

Just read this entire thing, not bad.