|Reviews for Boys and Pets|
| Goonipers chapter 25 . 7/19
LOL the mating scene! I don't usually read 25 chapters but yours are kinda short, so I didn't mind. Please use a space after every comma, and have one person speaking per paragraph.
The pets idea is a good one, as well as all the animal pairings being within species only. The human plotlines are a bit confusing, but I kept scanning them. Good story!
| Goonipers chapter 20 . 7/19
The POV switches were a little jarring, so close together.
| Goonipers chapter 14 . 7/19
Is she lying about the pill? Why else would he stop?
| Goonipers chapter 5 . 7/19
Oh, so that's how she got Monica. I thought they were bonded at birth previously. Who eats talking pets, anyway?
| Goonipers chapter 3 . 7/19
And they're pregnant at the same time. This is getting freaky.
| Goonipers chapter 2 . 7/19
Thanks for the warnings. You could've turned the end author's note in a scene, instead of explaining it.
| Goonipers chapter 1 . 7/19
Can you edit and add a space after every comma please?
You also need to separate paragraphs so that one person speaks per paragraph.
Also, she's got a pet bear?! That's massive! Where does she sleep? Lucky that both have pet rabbits that fancy each other. What are the chances?
| hanuman1702 chapter 10 . 7/15
The relationship between Alex and Melanie is so cute.
| hanuman1702 chapter 8 . 7/15
Hey, some of the dialogue is a bit difficult to read-it's hard to know which character is talking. It might be a formatting error. When a new character talks, I think you should make it a new line.
| hanuman1702 chapter 7 . 7/15
Menstruation is the absolute worst! My reaction to tampons was the same as Monica's.
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/4
Losing friends is painful like melinna
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/31
The best. I really loved it
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/1
Nice one. Loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/21
Was fun reading. I'll wait for next tomorrow